@Fothrul, hey girl! First of all, welcome to Penana!! I really hope you enjoy it here! I have really come to love this community. Secondly, I just posted a comment on your first chapter! I have done some beta reading on here for a couple authors already and I'm pretty respectful when it comes to the visions of other writers. Let me know if you'd like another pair of eyes! I hope you like it here!