@Lunassandra Hughes, I am so sorry, I meant to get back to you. The last few days I've been extraordinarily sick and haven't been able to think straight. I did read the first chapter of Hiraeth and am putting together a critical analysis for you. I plan on reading the rest and finishing it up over the next bit, I swear :)
Also, was it you who commented on my own work? I haven't looked at them yet, but thank you. It was a pleasant surprise :)