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Beta-ing - Readers and Authors
Beta-ing - Readers and Authors
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Looking for someone to Review or Critique me!
Lunassandra Hughes
Lunassandra Hughes1 month ago
Hi, if anyone has the time it would be hella appreciated if one of ya'll took a look at any of my works and critique it. I have more than a few that need some critiques from outside eyes lol. Any help is appreciated! :)
Imascribble
Imascribble1 month ago
I'll take a look later for you :) Is there one in particular you would rather I read?
Lunassandra Hughes
Lunassandra Hughes1 month ago
@Imascribble, Any is fine, though some of them run sex-heavy (Carnal Desires being the chief one. 13 has sex scenes, but not in the first chapter, Hiraeth has an eating disorder and explicit rape in it. The others are safe for the most part). I am interested in getting 13 and Hiraeth reviewed the most.
Imascribble
Imascribble1 month ago
Perfect, I'll focus on those ones then :)
Lunassandra Hughes
Lunassandra Hughes4 weeks ago
@Imascribble, I was wondering if you had gotten a chance to look at either?
Imascribble
Imascribble4 weeks ago
@Lunassandra Hughes, I am so sorry, I meant to get back to you. The last few days I've been extraordinarily sick and haven't been able to think straight. I did read the first chapter of Hiraeth and am putting together a critical analysis for you. I plan on reading the rest and finishing it up over the next bit, I swear :)
Also, was it you who commented on my own work? I haven't looked at them yet, but thank you. It was a pleasant surprise :)
Lunassandra Hughes
Lunassandra Hughes4 weeks ago
Oh no, I'm sorry to hear that you're sick. I know it's flu season. I hope you feel better! Yeah, it was me that commented. I really liked your work, though I've only gotten around to reading of them so far. You're really skilled with the written word. I noted the few grammatical errors I could find but I just couldn't get enough of how well it was written.
Imascribble
Imascribble4 weeks ago
Wow, thanks for the glowing praise! I have to tell you that based on the first chapter I read, you're not so bad yourself! I'll go into more detail in a private message later, but I've been really enjoying your style, your grammar, and everything about it. One of the top writers on Penana by far!
Lunassandra Hughes
Lunassandra Hughes4 weeks ago
Thanks, I really appreciate it. I've come pretty far thank God lol.
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