If you find the time, I'm looking for someone to look over "A Quilan Called Brisance". It's a long one, so even a skim would be helpful. It's a love story set in an alternate steampunk timeline. There are also giant eagles. And gin. Lots of gin.

I need someone to look at it and tell me it's crap... and then tell me how I can improve it.

Thanks in advanced.

I'll read yours, though I have no experience in steampunk writing so fair warning. All I ask is that you read one of mine. (Mine are long too, so if you pick one of mine to critique we'll hopefully balance each other out.)