Looking to read, critique, and offer edits to anyone with a brand new story that needs a good once over. After all, first impressions are everything. Just let me know the title of your story, its genre, and I'll give it a go as soon as I can!
@Bones4, I'm specifically looking for stories that haven't been established yet... but your first chapter has me intrigued. I've bookmarked it and I'll be suggesting some line edits in the near future.
I just need to get off my butt and finish my third installment of my vampire story (Codename: PRIEST)... after that point in the tale, I’ll take all the pointers and suggestion I can get :)