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#1
夏夏
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1 year ago
我很好奇大家是會比較喜歡看動作描寫得很詳細的作品,還是有對話就好,其他的不用太過清楚的,還是說其實這個沒有什麼人太過在意???
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#2
魚落井
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1 year ago
每一幕的場景、氣氛、人物對話、動作、情感、敘事等的篇幅需要微妙的平衡,需因應劇情需要突出某方面,例如打鬥就突出動作。通常比例失衡就會不好看。
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夏夏
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1 year ago
嗯!嗯!我知道了謝謝
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#3
綠木柚子(ゆず)
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1 year ago
如果當下只「對白」可以讓讀的人看的出角色講話的神態或是心思
那我覺得只要有對白就夠
相反的如果光只有「對白」還不足以讓人進入那個情景
我就會覺得加上動作描寫,可以讓對的白呈現更加細膩
又有時候有些場景也是無聲勝有聲……像18X(誤)、或是武戲
這時候就不一定需要有什麼對白
所以我個人是會不太在意,因為文字都是相輔相成構成的
基本上只要都讀得順暢、可以讓人進入劇情就可以了
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夏夏
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1 year ago
我會注意的!謝謝啦
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#5
夏夏
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1 year ago
ㄜ...我怎麼有點搞不懂“告知”手法跟“展示”手法的用法
(對不起!我是新手XD)可以跟我說一下嗎?謝謝你!
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夏夏
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1 year ago
@綠茶老司機, 喔~我了解了!謝謝你>-<
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#6
劍狂燕飛
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1 year ago
看你是編寫那部份的,如果是人物的純互動,除了對話之外,還有神態,肢體語言,動作,心理描寫部份,以及每個人思考方式,大概就這些。
如果是武打部份,當下環境,襯托氣氛,衝突,動機,最後才是比武較勁,可以設於假設的方式,去了解人物當下想法?然後再加以點綴加大衝突力道。
而細節部份就看要不要寫個詳細了,以我來說的話,我通常一場武打戲都會寫得適中,主要是把那種絕望感,壓迫感,寫出來,畢竟每個人編寫方式都不相同,就用擅於文筆去編寫就好。
以上皆是個人經驗談,僅作參考。
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夏夏
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1 year ago
恩~謝謝
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