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兩位雙主角的互動?
#1
藍狐 BLUE FOX
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2 weeks ago
畢竟雙主角是小說裡劇情互動中最長久的關鍵。
是不是都要兩方都有優缺點互補?
而且兩方都是缺點較多的話也可以隨著劇情發展增加雙主角之間的感情。
但是,如果把兩位雙主角設定的太完美,都是互相優點完全沒有缺點讓對方產生有恨意及討厭感,也沒有互相踩雷過一次,完全也沒有彼此吵架跟爭議一次,是否相處過程的劇情反而沒有顯現出兩位的特色而無味?
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小船兒
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2 weeks ago
個人認為角色有缺點比較好,但有缺點都可以不影響雙主角的關係。如果要寫雙主角沒有吵架,那可以考驗他們的默契度,或者有人從中挑撥離間,讓他們產生懷疑之類。
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伍德‧瓦懷特
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2 weeks ago
有缺點跟雙方有恨意和討厭感是兩回事。
例如主角A可能擅長從物證推論,但是不懂人心;主角B比較善解人意,但是邏輯比較差,雙方也不見得會討厭彼此,而且可能互補。
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#4
小魚一尾
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2 weeks ago
我覺得吵架也可以很可愛,但不能搞得像言語霸凌或人身攻擊,像是你很煩欸跟看到你就噁心,前者可能是好朋友鬥嘴,後者可能就是真罵人了
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