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文章太長怎麼辦?
#1
諾貓
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8 years ago
大家好,我是骷髏貓,前不久剛加入Penana的新人,我有個困擾,便是我的小說《零界》的每一章節都有些太長了,一篇至少都要25分鐘才能看完,之前是因為我每一章節都有所謂的前言,所以很難把故事拆開,要拆也不曉得從哪裡下手,所以最多都只能分成上下章。
(考慮該怎麼拆是害怕章節太長,讀者看的很累。)
該怎麼辦?硬拆嗎?
http://www.penana.com/user/2880/%E9%AA%B7%E9%AB%8F%E8%B2%93
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倪語
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8 years ago
@骷髏貓, 你好!我是可莉姆,不論是在寫作還是在Penana都是完全的新手(大概來了一個月)
剛看了你的作品,發現真的是有點長呢!
建議可以從一件事與另一件事之間分段,至於如何修飾呢?就必須仰賴你的寫作能力囉!
(以上純屬參考,小可現讀國一,歡迎交朋友!)
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葉嘉勞
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8 years ago
@骷髏貓, 六年加每章25分鐘,小弟是來膜拜的。我都5年了,都係一篇小說寫到尾,不過無你咁強,砍掉重煉。只是諗到邊寫到邊。懶得重寫。所以對你非常敬佩
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諾貓
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8 years ago
@平凡的葉嘉勞, 謝謝誇獎,那你覺得會不會看得很累,要重排嗎?
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諾貓
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8 years ago
@可莉姆, 謝謝建議,我再想想怎麼辦,本人目前高三,歡迎當朋友
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#2
葉嘉勞
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8 years ago
實會啦。我都有你同樣而相反的問題。我5年前的篇章得7,8百字,而家有2千,我係想合埋,但已經做5到。因為每章都有結尾…
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#3
源東行
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8 years ago
前言,也許可以放在文末,像艾西莫夫的基地那樣,故事性以外的東西,的那些背景啦,對世界觀之類,都獨立在章末,一帶過,這也是很常用的手法。
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諾貓
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8 years ago
@源東行, 你這建議還鎮不錯耶(>﹏<),好喔,我找機會去改試試
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#4
左悠文
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8 years ago
在小說裡頭,章節除了是方便連載外,還有更重要的使命:間場。
章回小說,或者說書都喜歡利用間場去牽起每個章節的高潮。既吸引讀書繼續追看,也將按下未表的情節作一個伏筆。
間場的重要性,也可以將一些要轉換場景或換個角度(例如將重心由一個角色轉到另一個角色)的情況透過章節直接換場,來得自然。
當然,很多時候,這種形式更可以營造時間推移。例如一個章節的角色,在後幾個章節都沒出現。作者不用交代,只專心交代其他人物和情節。待較後章節這角色再出場時,就有了一種故事已推進,而角色已有一段時間沒出場。
這方面,古龍先生可寫得很出色的。
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諾貓
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8 years ago
@左悠文,謝謝建議,請問古龍先生是……?
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左悠文
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8 years ago
@骷髏貓, 古龍先生是與金庸先生齊名的大家,寫新派武俠小說的宗師。
很值得找幾本名作閱讀。
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#5
智炫
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8 years ago
古龍是著名的武俠小說作者,代表作例如有《絕代雙驕》
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#6
Dinezz
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8 years ago
讀緊書的小朋友可能有耐性睇好多字
但對於在職人士來說,又真係幾趕客,我作為編輯,有時見記者d稿成千三四字一篇,都叫救命,,,
同埋文吾好寫得好大段,成30行先一段,見到都覺辛苦 ^^
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#7
有馬二
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8 years ago
根據研究,網頁一頁的文字最好維持五千字左右。
加上 Penana 主力經營流動平台,針對手機閱讀的,可以更短一點。大家試想像手機顯示小說,甚麼長度及排版比較好。
敝人維持在一千至千五字左右,約是一個報章小專欄的長度,僅作參考。
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