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在尋常故事裡的值得吐槽的異常元素
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渺羽
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7 years ago
因為最近在武俠小說裡寫出了指向性地雷和矽藻土炸彈的這類東西,自己都吐槽自己到底在些什麼鬼東西,可是寫出來的東西去又很符合設定。
而我平時寫奇幻小說也是出現大量槍械,大量格鬥技,甚至是足以轟掉整棟樓的汽車炸彈,那種通常在掛名奇幻類型的小說裡不會出現的異常元素。
我只是好奇一問,
想問看看各位有沒有像我類似有習慣在常見的故事裡塞入異常元素的習慣或至少這麼做過,讓自己都想吐槽的狀況出現過?
純粹想看看這般做的人在PENANA有多少?
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那位阿姨
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7 years ago
有阿,明明寫(完)了,卻還在考慮下一集的劇情
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渺羽
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7 years ago
這不是要素吧。
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
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7 years ago
因為我不太清楚什麼才算是「異常元素」,
或是說,在奇幻中什麼可能性也會有~
可能大家做了也不覺得是異常呢~
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渺羽
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7 years ago
即是說在奇幻故事中出現不那麼奇幻的東西XD
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
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7 years ago
@渺羽, 哈哈~~我也有這個構思,不過未實行~
經你這樣一說,我便很想試試!
我想在《叛神軍團》加入機械元素~XDDDD
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亞盾
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7 years ago
@渺羽, 奇幻世界中什麼東西出現應該都不算異常吧,像我的“噬界”中就有設定一個以機械立國的國家
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渺羽
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7 years ago
@亞盾, 然後有一大半篇幅都是在描寫槍戰w
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亞盾
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7 years ago
@渺羽, 這就要看作者的喜好了,喜歡槍戰描寫槍戰也很好的
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渺羽
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7 years ago
@亞盾, 因為我就是明明寫了個奇幻小說但卻不知道為什麼寫起狙擊戰,一直吐槽自己在幹什麼www
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朱諾(Juno)
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7 years ago
其實我覺得加什麼進去都不奇怪,畢竟,奇幻本來就是天馬行空
只要沒有維和感就可以了~
&如果情況准許,我都是想到什麼就塞什麼
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渺羽
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7 years ago
不見得是講奇幻,也講武俠,寫武俠小說結果出現用指向性地雷陰人、用矽藻土炸彈炸人的江湖中人ry
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朱諾(Juno)
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7 years ago
@渺羽, 很少看武俠小說呢 不太能理解那種感覺
不過,搭配的好就沒問題了吧?
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渺羽
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7 years ago
@朱諾(Juno), 我只能說,雖然是我的創意,但連我寫出來也覺得相當詭異w
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朱諾(Juno)
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7 years ago
@渺羽, 你的小說好長啊,好厲害
不過 我要等指考後才能追文,嗚…
到時候才會知道是不是真的很詭異←是說 妳自己的小說也沒好去哪啊
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嵐隱
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7 years ago
@渺羽
哈哈,讓我想起宋代的霹靂炮
好像是炸彈的原形
如果是在戰場上,有了砲火也不奇怪
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渺羽
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7 years ago
@嵐隱, 我的故事設定在以明代為藍本的架空世界,所以火器已經相當發達了,江湖中人真的沒有人懂火器反而很奇怪。所以我甚至設定了一個幫派是專門使用火器的。
當然矽藻土炸彈還是太過了。1866年才出現的東西。
不過還是符合我那角色的設定就是了。
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