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#1
葉嘉勞
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7 years ago
近日看了一本小說,全職法師。越看越覺得自己的小說比不上別人。因為我太不注重等級上升的細節了。升級打怪變得太單調。別人的就尤如網游升級一樣。有根有據,循序漸進,而我的主角跳級太快。唉,看來我不太適合寫小說。言情不行,細節不行,打鬥不行,鋪排不行,描述不行。看到哪寫到哪。最終辦多角色也記不住
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#2
心晴
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7 years ago
很懂你的感受,想當初我寫的時候也是這樣,回顧的時候總覺得自己寫的可笑,
主角個性矛盾,想寫的有趣卻又顯的太做作,淘汰過好幾本自己寫的小說,
也只能多看多揣摩,到現在其實我自己的文筆也沒有到很好,反正就是瘋狂看小說就對了XD
曾經看到有人說過小說寫的好不好其實沒那麼重要,只要作者寫的開心,讀者看著開心,也是一本好的小說,至於內容的好壞,就是由作者自己去磨練及評論了。
一起加油吧!
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葉嘉勞
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7 years ago
@心晴, 已經無法回頭。我是不會輕易放棄自己小說的人。只能一直寫到尾。
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心晴
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7 years ago
@葉嘉勞,
自然是不能放棄的,我都是寫完才淘汰XD
特別跑去看了你的小說,覺得並沒有你講的那麼差,
讓人有想一直看下去的動力。
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葉嘉勞
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7 years ago
@心晴, 看了一眼就有這種感覺...不用安慰我啦😅
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鶖翎
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7 years ago
我想主要還是得看人喔。有些人就是很想寫出「心中好文筆的小說」,有些人是希望「看的人看得開心」,也有人是「只要寫得開心」。
不過,在達到自己目標前都是許多的磨練與挫折。
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葉嘉勞
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7 years ago
@鶖翎, 我現在寫小說是忠於自己多過讀者
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鶖翎
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7 years ago
@葉嘉勞,既然如此,就是以你自己滿意為主啦XD
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#3
橋街過客
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7 years ago
耐著性子寫下去總會有進步的0W0
不過我沒有看過網遊,也不會寫打鬥,就挑自己喜歡的題材和比較擅長的東西來寫。
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葉嘉勞
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7 years ago
@橋街過客, 對,感興趣先係最重要
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#4
四十四步
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7 years ago
葉嘉勞大,你的小說沒有你想的這麼差拉!劇情感覺很有趣喔!!
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#5
鶖翎
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7 years ago
也許你缺的是修稿?
寫習慣的話,細節是可以在修稿中不斷加入補強的。
跳躍得太快的問題多半在修稿可以彌補,再不然就是需要沉下心來寫的劇情,你比較沒有耐心寫下去。
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葉嘉勞
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7 years ago
@鶖翎, 我太懶了,不想修稿,寫完一章即post.連錯別字也不查
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鶖翎
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7 years ago
@葉嘉勞,那就沒辦法了,不修稿的作品往往有很多缺點,除非寫稿時就很細心。
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#6
杜于
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7 years ago
從無到有才是最難的。
海明威都說了『初稿是屎!』
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#7
嵐隱
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7 years ago
我覺得最重要的是你想要表達什麼
寫的好不好倒是其次,那可以之後慢慢修
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葉嘉勞
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7 years ago
@嵐隱, 一想到要修700多章就打退堂鼓
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嵐隱
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7 years ago
@葉嘉勞
。皿。 驚!! 真的好多!!
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