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你們喜歡第一人稱還是第三人稱?
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公爵
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6 years ago
我認為各有各好。
在寫故事的時候是第一人稱好,因為比較容易寫出自己甚麼也不知的感覺,寫自己的感受也容易很多,不用寫其他角色的想法。
但在看故事的時候又會覺得第三人稱比較好,因為自己不是作者,不知作者心,很多時候都會被自己搞得混亂了。
對於像我這些自己做狗糧的人是如何是好.......
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Wendy,Dani,Brian
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6 years ago
@poon poon, 我是擅長第三,因為可以形容且敘述的更好,第一怎麼寫都不是很好,會有些無法形容或是難以呈現我要的感覺,雖然想法是因人而意啦ww
喜歡的則是都可以,畢竟各有優點。
就按照自己擅長的吧,呈現的會更好,你自己寫得也會比較上手(?)
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公爵
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6 years ago
@Wendy,Dani,Brian,
我經常在寫第一的時候都在想:如果這是三該有多好xd
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Wendy,Dani,Brian
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6 years ago
@poon poon, 哈哈哈為什麼要這樣想,第一人稱形容或敘述的也能很好啊ww
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羅衣
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6 years ago
@poon poon,
寫第一人稱就會想,要是寫第三人稱多好啊,這個場景又可以寫A君的心理,又可以寫B君的心理,特別是無口角色,如果用第一人稱寫,主角就完全無法跟他交流,也不知道他在想什麼……
可是寫第三人稱時,想轉換寫心理描寫就會覺得很不自然(功力不足QQ)還有就是沒驚喜,因為第一人稱我們就跟著主角傻呼呼地走來走去,比較有臨場感,第三人稱就是全知視角,好像所有資訊都透露給讀者知道,就會變得好無聊
其實怎寫也有缺點,我也同意寫自己擅長的 ><
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公爵
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6 years ago
@Wendy,Dani,Brian, 因為如果寫第一就會想,為何其他角色都看不透我?哭哭xd
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公爵
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6 years ago
@羅衣, 對對對!每次寫第一都只顧寫自己的感受,其他人就,算了吧!xd
但寫第三又很想在某些時候寫一下「自己」心中的感受,都亂了xd
(你留好大段喔<33
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羅衣
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6 years ago
@poon poon,
為了拖延時間不去做現實世界要做的事……其實是因為我也為人稱煩惱了好久,去翻教寫作的書都會先看人稱的chapter >w< 所以比較多廢話啦
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Wendy,Dani,Brian
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6 years ago
@poon poon, 原來哈哈哈,也是啦ww但不知道別人心境才會有種懸疑感(?)哈哈XDXD
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公爵
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6 years ago
@羅衣, 還是要面對現實的啦.......你都會去看書,好好喔,我都是寫好玩的......xd
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公爵
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6 years ago
@Wendy,Dani,Brian, 也對,但總是會想三想四的w
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#2
梧桐雨
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6 years ago
可以試試看用第一人稱的時候就用猜測的方式帶出別人心聲(我都這樣啦)~~我是比較喜歡用第一人稱啦~~
用第三人稱的話...大概是用符號或某某人暗想之類的詞帶出來吧...比較少用第三人稱寫~~不好意思
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#3
阿雀
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6 years ago
短篇第一人稱 長篇第三人稱
因為長篇要表達的東西太多了 第一人稱不夠用。
∠( ᐛ 」∠)_
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#4
羊皮紙
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6 years ago
是否能一三人稱並存呢?
第三人稱部分較少
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