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該怎麼描述故事背景和轉場畫面呢?
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(๑òᆺó๑)
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4 years ago
大家好,我是新人(・(ェ)・)。
想問大家是如何描述故事背景和轉場畫面(或是其他人視角)。
雖然有很多大點子,但寫到途中時總是抓不到描述方向,導致卡關了。
舉個簡單例子,
打怪物ー>得到寶物ㄧ>回家
但總是卡在(為什麼、在哪裡、氣氛)打怪物,得到寶物後(心情、舉止、對話)ㄧ>回家。
所以想問問大家有什麼心得/方法才能接到下一個大點子呢。
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Historia
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4 years ago
推建十三哥的建議。
利用倒敘方式,讓讀者知道脈絡。例如:回家→心情→打怪。
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嵐隱
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4 years ago
@子海, 更改順序來寫,好像挺好玩的。
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
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4 years ago
這個⋯⋯先決定好大點子的特性、強弱點、無效攻擊兩三種,及有效攻擊一種。之後決定團隊中的工作,誰負責失敗攻擊,誰提出有效,誰最後執行有效攻擊⋯⋯
之後,將以上的點子平均在之前的劇情中當伏筆,什麼場口發生,如小戰、公會聊天、想別人的傳聞。當每一個場口也有特別的點子令讀者發現就不會太死板,亦可以牽連到大點子。
最後用順時間序寫一次,再構思故事情節的先後次序,令故事變得有神秘感及有趣。
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#3
聖賢
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4 years ago
不知道偶的算不算,自己點來看看,偶的作品。
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