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首次挑戰愛情小說跪求高人指點qwq
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星歿
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7 years ago
http://www.penana.com/story/12788/沒有他的未來/issue/1
這是之前創作挑戰完就閒置已久的坑( ノдˋ;)雖說是短篇(?)小說,歷經四年來棄坑無數如今總算出了個完結篇窩還是豪感動rrrr一周下來的爆肝人生也值得了(跪泣
接下來會慢慢把後續放上來,不要問我為什麼不一次放😜我絕對不會說我想吊讀者們的胃口(遭踹飛##
以前都寫奇幻,愛情的部分可能沒有很好,日後也請多多指教了uwu
我記得這裡愛情的寫手很多吶!各位盡管給狠評,咱是強化玻璃心www(欸
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四十四步
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7 years ago
@星歿大,加油餒∼
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星歿
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7 years ago
@四十四步,謝謝你><我會努力的
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四十四步
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7 years ago
@星歿, 我覺得可以試著用第一人稱的寫法寫寫看喔!因為第一人稱比較著重於內心的角色以及情感的編織,第三人稱比較注重劇情'描述等,也許會比較有愛情小說的感覺∼XD
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星歿
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7 years ago
@四十四步, 謝謝你的建議❤
不過呀qwq長期以第三人稱創作的我幾乎沒有寫第一人稱的經驗……假若哪天練成了必來嘗試XDDDD
(是說可以不用加"大"啦XDDD可以直接叫我小星小歿不用太拘束XDDD
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四十四步
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7 years ago
@星歿, 好喔!小星XD,練成了記得跟我說嘿∼
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星歿
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7 years ago
@四十四步, 哈哈好歐好歐XDDD
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幾時茗月
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7 years ago
指點我最會了!
我..指著某處...點點點點..............(被拍飛!
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星歿
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7 years ago
@幾時茗月, 哪裡??哪裡??(找眼睛←此人近視
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幾時茗月
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7 years ago
@星歿, 鉛筆太小點是吧,我換[好神拖]來點,夠大了吧!
我再點點點......(你滾去認真賞文! 啪!......再度飛ㄌ。
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#2
貓影
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7 years ago
來拜師~~
某貓很不會寫愛情類的ˊˋ
覺得會寫愛情小說的人都好厲害www
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朱諾(Juno)
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7 years ago
@貓影, +1會寫愛情小說的都好神~
我只會寫曖昧呀XD
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星歿
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7 years ago
@貓影, 我也這麼覺得qwq現在已經腦汁用盡了
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貓影
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7 years ago
@星歿, 腦袋已經破掉了ˊˇˋ
別擔心~一定會有強手來的!!
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星歿
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7 years ago
@貓影, 好歐我抱持滿滿的希望XDDDD
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貓影
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7 years ago
@朱諾(Juno), 哈哈哈曖昧真的比較好寫
至於後面他們的愛情發展我就不行了www
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貓影
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7 years ago
@星歿, 加油!俺只能給你大大的鼓勵XDD
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朱諾(Juno)
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7 years ago
@貓影, 想不想從頭曖昧到尾XD
哎呀 我覺得貓影的愛情就寫的不錯啊
@星歿高手再次喔~
(是說 我到底有沒有成功標注到啊?就假裝我有吧!)
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星歿
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7 years ago
@朱諾(Juno), 我手機版標人從來沒有成功過XDDD((小歿真的不是高手啊啊啊
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Wendy,Dani,Brian
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7 years ago
@貓影, 啊哈哈哈哈我也不會╮(╯3╰)╭
愛情真的很難哈哈哈哈,會寫愛情的真的好厲害啊!!!qwq
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星歿
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7 years ago
@Wendy,Dani,Brian, 我覺得妳寫得很好啊OAO!!!!!!!!!!!!
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朱諾(Juno)
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7 years ago
@星歿,真的 手機版好多功能不能用~
別否認了 小星很厲害
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貓影
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7 years ago
@朱諾(Juno), 就決定從頭曖昧到尾了哈哈哈XDD
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貓影
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7 years ago
@Wendy,Dani,Brian, 我負責欣賞別人寫的愛情故事就好哈哈哈~~
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Wendy,Dani,Brian
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7 years ago
@貓影, 哈哈哈哈你欣賞自己的就足夠啦XDXD
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心晴
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7 years ago
我才覺得會寫奇幻的你們很厲害啊QQ
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Wendy,Dani,Brian
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7 years ago
@心晴, 哈哈哈對我來說,愛情小說家比較厲害啦XD
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貓影
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7 years ago
@Wendy,Dani,Brian, +1我喜歡看愛情故事,很虐的那種www
然後我發現我寫不出來(跪
真是佩服會寫愛情故事的
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星歿
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7 years ago
@貓影, 真的真的XDDD我完全是校刊拖稿到最後一周才動筆(欠打##
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貓影
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7 years ago
@星歿, 寫文追求刺激感啊哈哈哈
沒關係我也是www要交作文之類的我都拖很晚啊
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貓影
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7 years ago
@星歿, 寫文追求刺激感啊哈哈哈
沒關係我也是www要交作文之類的我都拖很晚啊
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星歿
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7 years ago
@貓影, 爆肝啊完全是在爆肝XDDD天天熬夜到凌晨我發誓再也不要這麼做了qwq....
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錫日
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7 years ago
我覺得你們太厲害了😂我無法寫那種感覺rrrrrr!!(難言的文風)我只會把主角黑化然後加愛情(欸?)不過我也佩服那種清新愛情寫手😂😂
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星歿
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7 years ago
@錫日, 欸欸是指歐美風嗎?( °∀°)
黑化+愛情?等等我腦袋浮現病嬌這兩個字XDD
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錫日
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7 years ago
@星歿, 算是吧,那種懸疑沈重感(?
我之前寫的是微黑,現在可能會寫成那樣吧😂不過那是很後面的劇情了XD
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