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我是15歲新手
#1
雨
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8 years ago
希望大家有空可以幫我看一下然後給點意見好嗎謝謝
因為我第一次寫小說所以不是那麼好 。
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#2
貓繪子
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8 years ago
我也15啊~~找到同齡的!!
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雨
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8 years ago
@貓繪子, 很高興認識你哦哈哈哈
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#3
貓繪子
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8 years ago
我剛剛去看妳的作品
我不知道妳是不是故意這麼寫喇
但是對我來說節奏太快了點
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雨
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8 years ago
@貓繪子, 節奏快是什麼意思??
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貓繪子
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8 years ago
@雨, 可能是故事進展太快 沒有描述到細節
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#6
小圓
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8 years ago
加油!:)
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雨
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8 years ago
@想進化去的ET, 謝謝你哦<3
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#7
律希
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8 years ago
嗚啊~這邊也是同齡的。然後可能是因為劇情太快的關係,所以角色的性格特徵方面不太明顯。
一起加油吧!
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雨
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8 years ago
@律希, 好專業哈哈看來我得加把勁囉
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#8
奈梨
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8 years ago
文筆稍微白話了一點!感覺有些地方的描述會讓人出戲w不過新手寫這樣已經超強了!加油喔!
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雨
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8 years ago
@奈梨, 謝謝你哦 覺得會寫小說的人超厲害
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#9
XIA
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8 years ago
妳好我是老夏 多多指教摟
我的作品 榮耀之路之法神 剛更完(累癱
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#10
智炫
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8 years ago
我都想有人評一評我的作品。歡迎大家給我意見
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#11
石異
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8 years ago
這裡也是15歲哈哈( 舉手
寫的很好呢! 不過我也覺得多加點角色的想法或細解會更好喔~
加油吧,也歡迎給我的小說一點意見xd
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#12
夏沫
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8 years ago
我是14歲呢...今天剛下載這個app的~~
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