I'm a screenwriter trying to improve her craft, right now she has exams and she does not have the time to redraft her work until the summer. So I'm asking you if you would like to review these drafts and see what needs work:
-Parfait: http://www.penana.com/story/1182/parfait/toc (I have script notes from when I entered it in a competition, but more feedback would be helpful thank you)
-I Have Something To Tell You...(short): http://www.penana.com/story/1227/i-have-something-to-tell-you
If any of you have any constructive feedback to provide, I would gladly listen :). Thank You!