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A screenwriter seeking reviewers
BlueberryKitten
BlueberryKitten3 years ago
Hello,
I'm a screenwriter trying to improve her craft,  right now she has exams and she does not have the time to redraft her work until the summer.  So I'm asking you if you would like to review these drafts and see what needs work:

-Raven: http://www.penana.com/story/1180/raven-book-1/toc

-Parfait: http://www.penana.com/story/1182/parfait/toc  (I have script notes from when I entered it in a competition, but more feedback would be helpful thank you)

-I Have Something To Tell You...(short): http://www.penana.com/story/1227/i-have-something-to-tell-you

If any of you have any constructive feedback to provide, I would gladly listen :).  Thank You!
Ramen Noodles
Ramen Noodles3 years ago
I will be certain to examine these in my spare time :D
BlueberryKitten
BlueberryKitten3 years ago
Thank you :3
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