So I've been working on my novel Hope's Bright! for about 4 years now. It's come a long way and it's nearly finished (Well I did finish it but decided to add more) However, I have a lack of comments. Is there any one who would like to read through my book and tell me what they think. I want more people's perspective on how things like:
#which characters are favourites and what they think of them.
#The plot and what they think is going to happen/ what they want to happen
#And ask any questions that I can Answer.
If anyone is happy to do this I'll gladly return the favour. You can read my book at the following link.
https://www.penana.com/story/7621/hope-s-bright/toc

Hey, I found what I read of your book mesmerizing. It just pulls you in when you read it and you don't ever want to let go of it. If you would like I could tell you what age group is the most interested in you book, it even helps me with punctuation errors or spelling errors it gives you feedback and tells you if it it is Enageing or not.
hope you'll allow me to help
    yours
          lily