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新手介紹、宣傳、及故事推薦
新手介紹、宣傳、及故事推薦
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希望能夠聽到大家對小弟新作的意見
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貓老師
貓老師 ⋅ 8 years ago
最近寫了一個小品，關於老鼠，篇幅很短，自知不是甚麼佳作，但又不懂如何改善，如果不嫌棄的話，希望可以聽到你的心得。

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捕鼠記
http://www.penana.com/story/5036/捕鼠記/issue/1?ref=noti
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