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糖糖
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7 years ago
這是小思寫的故事的第一章,而主要是描寫人的,所以想請前輩們給我這新手一些意見,請盡量批評!
http://www.penana.com/story/8828/%E5%B8%83%E4%BD%A9%E8%92%82%E5%8D%A1%E5%82%B3/issue/4
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重新再來&夏
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7 years ago
@小思, 你有一個跟我以前一樣的問題,那就是排版,排版如果不清楚,有些人會看不懂,除了這個,其他挑不出什麼問題。
繼續加油,你形容的都非常好。
我是新手第二級,所以如果有冒犯你的地方,我非常抱歉。
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#2
糖糖
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7 years ago
不要緊,但是我不懂得在這網站上如何排版。
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金魚老兄 戥月乂
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7 years ago
建議分段落 這樣讀者看的時候才不會那麼累
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#4
Walker
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7 years ago
雖然我是新手,但排版我還是略懂,以下是我個人的習慣,你可以參考一下
首先,把所有的東西變成全形(按下shift+空白鍵)
如何知道變成全形?按下空白鍵,如果是全形,你的空白鍵一個就要一個字一樣大。
以下是我排版習慣
1.每個段落前面空兩格
2.每個段落之間要空一行
我習慣人物講一句話再加上一些描述就是一個段落了。
如果聽不懂,可以去看看我的作品(偷打廣告)「莫名其妙被綁架的我成為了英雄」
以上是我的小心得,不吝指教。
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