Greeting the Neighbor852Please respect copyright.PENANAx2reYeaVQW
Charlie started the car, putting it in reverse as her blind spot recognition beeped. Rear incoming traffic. Gasping, she put the car in brake and clutched her hand over her heart. That was a close one. It certainly would have been a collision had there not been the beeping coming from the rear backup camera. She edged out of her driveway carefully and smoothed out her long, blonde hair. She had been through several treatments to get it this smooth and silky. She smiled at reflection in the rear view mirror. Damn. Her hair really did look good today. 852Please respect copyright.PENANAwgLOpw28VQ
Now on the street, Charlie passed by an elderly couple. Her neighbors. They were friendly enough and they had a beautiful golden retriever with long, flowing golden hair. Much like her own. She liked that the Petersons were friendly to her as well. It was like a breath of fresh air, talking to the both of them. 852Please respect copyright.PENANATSpMvZ5wcj
She put the window down. "Hey, Mr. Peterson." Charlie smiled. 852Please respect copyright.PENANAvJWi3CPlRt
He blinked. "What do you want? Haven't you bothered us enough?" 852Please respect copyright.PENANAGARHMxsu13
"Come on, can't I just engage in a bit of friendly conversation?" 852Please respect copyright.PENANAKCIdmjtczU
Mr. Peterson took off his Fedora hat, showing a little thinning out. His salt and pepper hair was beginning to gray a little more. "What are you doing, Charlie?" he asked, sighing.852Please respect copyright.PENANA7wE7rqPBv9
"I was just going to work," she said. 852Please respect copyright.PENANAePVKWthvMu
"Work? Since when?" he asked. 852Please respect copyright.PENANAHV1r1T93Jl
"Since yesterday. Got myself a new job." She swelled her chest, puffing it up. 852Please respect copyright.PENANAZLRjaugLtz
"Okay, Charlie. If you have something really relevant to say, then you should be going on now. All right? You're holding up traffic." 852Please respect copyright.PENANApIvkr8s5GE
She then heard the series of honks, noticing a few cars behind her. Angry shouts. She waved her hand and put the car back in drive. 852Please respect copyright.PENANAOE0122KmAr
"Bye, Mr. Peterson! Have a nice day, sir. And bye bye Soph." She waved to the dog.852Please respect copyright.PENANAu7kglcB2Qt
The dog was trying to get in Charlie's car. Sad eyes. Whimpering. 852Please respect copyright.PENANAfPgxmtEQq4
"Come on, Soph." He tugged at the leash. "She doesn't want to pet you right now. And for the love of all things good, stop calling me Mr. Peterson." He scoffed and walked away quickly.852Please respect copyright.PENANAxWSpVdokt8
"Fine then, asshole," she said once the window was up. "Be that way. Some neighbors I have." 852Please respect copyright.PENANAdOJMfc80yW
Charlie began to drive out of the neighborhood. The idyllic homes. The perfect couples. Families. All of this behind her. She looked out of the rear mirror and saw the flash of Soph in the distance. Mr. Peterson running after her. It was for the best. All for the best. 852Please respect copyright.PENANAz6QdNG5W8I
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"So. Miss Peterson," the lawyer said as his wire-rimmed glasses fell down to the tip of his nose. "Why is it that you want to change your name legally?" 852Please respect copyright.PENANABXo7ykucxj
Charlie sighed. "Because I want to. Is there a problem?" 852Please respect copyright.PENANA83M9dSEn0a
"Well," he said. "These things are complicated. You're under 18. And you're not legally emancipated from your parents, so you can't change your name unless your father agrees to it. It doesn't sound like he does."852Please respect copyright.PENANAx1fHxu16h5
She pursed her lips. "Mr. Peterson is not my father." 852Please respect copyright.PENANA4eh6sVN67X
The lawyer nodded. "But your dad agreed to a paternity test to prove his point. You are 99.9% related to him. So yes, he is your father." 852Please respect copyright.PENANACcrbt9Vpps
Why didn't anyone understand that she was not his daughter? How long would it take to prove this?852Please respect copyright.PENANAwLwrqDVMOO
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This was so difficult to pull of. Like you have no idea. I probably failed at this one like I always fail at this one. The point of this exercise is to create an unreliable third person narrator. So, yeah, Charlie is constantly lying to the reader, leaving them to believe the lies at first, but we find out at the end that the neighbor is actually Charlie's dad. I don't know if anything will ever come of this exercise, but it was definitely a stretch for me. I really did enjoy writing an unreliable third person POV, it was just super hard to do. I hope you enjoyed this one! 852Please respect copyright.PENANABw1ivr87mW
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