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對於小說,我是一個相當寬容的人,題材爛大街沒關係,文筆平平沒關係,了無新意沒關係,劇情套路化容易猜,也沒關係,甚至可以說,只要寫的是中文、我看得懂,就都沒關係,但我沒想到饒是如此,依然有我看不下去的故事。8964 copyright protection410PENANAoHJyd5WY5Y 維尼
這部故事的敘述非常破碎,語句的結構非常渙散,有時候一句話來回看了三次你也無法理解它究竟想表達什麼,甚至會有些句子沒有主詞或是沒有動詞,讓人不禁懷疑作者難道是位小朋友?可偏偏作者在面對質疑時非常伶牙俐齒,那怕句子依舊沒有邏輯但至少比故事裡的文句順暢得多,這種堪稱靈異現象的現象至今我仍無法理解。8964 copyright protection410PENANAv6tpTZxDNX 維尼
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我曾以為作者年紀太小(幼稚園程度)、曾以為作者母語並非中文,然而事實總是狠狠將我打臉。許多我以為不該是問題的問題──例如正常地寫出一句話或是正常地標逗號──竟然能夠出現在一位出版過作品的作者身上,令當時的我震驚極了。414Please respect copyright.PENANALOlc5C9Mlb
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