終完修正完第一章。改動的地方如下:
角色改名736Please respect copyright.PENANAhIDt0dELPI
除了玄牛之外,所有畜牲集團的戰士都重新命名,因為那些陳生、李生、等等的命名,亂來之餘,又不符合作品性格。所以有以下改動:
何大力->南昌一絕736Please respect copyright.PENANAz8NuwzD534
劉元山->海柏736Please respect copyright.PENANAEhenQpd06V
陳生->曉尚736Please respect copyright.PENANAmQdXb0D3nw
李生->曉珀736Please respect copyright.PENANAfAymsLnQZA
嚴生->迎豐736Please respect copyright.PENANAr7bKe3OiRz
史生->富薈736Please respect copyright.PENANAb0G7VKYn3z
林生->傲形736Please respect copyright.PENANAQIW1Ga9uqv
黃生->利奧736Please respect copyright.PENANApdVdRJsZna
張生->曉岸
執文法736Please respect copyright.PENANAIvJ3pLnvKg
也許是小弟進步了,現在回看第一章,文法竟是那麼糟糕,是以也大幅修正。736Please respect copyright.PENANAKputy61EKR