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Within the Glass Vase - 4
jamber86
Nov 15, 2015
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3 years agoreply

Alef Magnus - This is a long story. But purposefully cut into the right places just to reveal enough information and keep an interest for the next. I may need to continue reading tomorrow.
3 years agoreply

jamber86 - @Alef Magnus, I was a little afraid that the concept wouldn't come across, especially with the name changing that is happening. I was hoping that the messaging between Marie and her adviser would make it more apparent. Do you have any suggestions?
3 years agoreply

Alef Magnus - @jamber86, nah it's my fault that I read this piece days apart that I've forgotten the whole context that ties all the stories together. I re-read the first chapters and now yeah I get the point of presenting every story. Love is the fatal flaw.
3 years agoreply

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