I need a review of this one penana.com/story/91384/infinity-magic



I was in the middle of doing a second revising for this one so I need a bit of review to help me polish the story later in my spare time

Hi! my name's Mottotte Shinji, one author of the Authors of Betsu no Sekai ni Mezameru. Have a look at "Betsu no Sekai ni Mezameru" a Fantasy/Adventure story about a man who had been transferred into a new world hoping to have a second chance in life to spend with his family.



I created 4 new creatures similar to Lycans, 2 of which already appeared.

Reviews would be greatly appreciated!

penana.com/story/97064/betsu-no-sekai-ni-mezameru/

 fun fact: The name Mottotte Shinji was inspired by Yorushika's "Itte" > "mada **Shinji**rarenai kedo, **Motto**, chanto I**tte**" meaning: Believe and Say it more.

After pirates destroy everything Diane loves, she decides to hunt something of theirs—treasure!


penana.com/story/96575/x-marks-the-spot

If you dont mind
Please read my story
And tell me if i need to fix something

https://www.penana.com/story/100007/dawn/

Thank you.