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大家喜歡以第一人稱還是第三人稱來寫作
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5 years ago
第一人稱可以較大程度的加入個人感情,有時會有種像跟讀者直接交流的感覺,不過在主觀角度下通常只能單線敘述,有些劇情裏的秘密和答案在腦海裏不停出現,可是第一人稱的主觀視角下,那些東西只能一步一步地鋪排,不能直接揭露出來,當然這問題較多存在於以第一人稱說自己的故事,如果是以第一人稱說別人的故事,相當不會這麼容易有這個問題。
第三人稱則能夠以上帝視角這種客觀的模式來寫作,維度可以任意轉變,作出多線的發展,使故事可以多點變化,也令鋪墊伏筆和揭露真相的自由性可以擴大,不過缺點是行文上未必較第一人稱那麼生動,要以情節來補救。
兩種基本寫作方法大家怎樣選擇呢
最近網上好像興起互動故事,感覺像第二人稱呢
但我還是比較傳統 喜歡原有的寫法
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Because
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5 years ago
1、2、3都會試一試,局限自己就會變蠢。
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Minz月月
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5 years ago
版主分析好細緻!
前段時間嘗試第一人稱覺得綁手綁腳(可能因為我自己設定的人物一般油鹽不進看淡生死沒有什麼情緒起伏……),所以我第一人稱大部分用來寫同人~
第二人稱寫到第二篇就寫不下去了……覺得不是目前我能駕馭的(圍觀請看 神父的日記 https://www.penana.com/story/39903 慘烈的黑歷史)
第三人稱就順暢多了,拿來寫原創(*¯︶¯*)
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第三人稱則能夠以上帝視角這種客觀的模式來寫作,維度可以任意轉變,作出多線的發展,使故事可以多點變化,也令鋪墊伏筆和揭露真相的自由性可以擴大,不過缺點是行文上未必較第一人稱那麼生動,要以情節來補救。
兩種基本寫作方法大家怎樣選擇呢
最近網上好像興起互動故事,感覺像第二人稱呢
但我還是比較傳統 喜歡原有的寫法