作者妳好477Please respect copyright.PENANA4HsFR222hx
受到妳的邀请477Please respect copyright.PENANAiGkWiGLYCK
稍微看了下这本佩姬477Please respect copyright.PENANA5P9G2sXdJ5
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法477Please respect copyright.PENANAn4frItHpQc
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西477Please respect copyright.PENANAqyk5HjzdoE
现世一堆东西477Please respect copyright.PENANAG6U14jYEa5
其实就很简单一个道理477Please respect copyright.PENANAhYhUWrjLgd
主角想要被爱477Please respect copyright.PENANAucVL8ScgW2
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱477Please respect copyright.PENANAZBcCNotQYG
男主卢克爱477Please respect copyright.PENANA3QjUBzYFrc
主角就爱回去477Please respect copyright.PENANAQqV8Xo918H
女主伊莎爱477Please respect copyright.PENANA4kQu6FaYd2
主角就爱回去477Please respect copyright.PENANApgVU8B1RkF
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理477Please respect copyright.PENANAuQ2MQKZM1f
想要被爱是佩姬的主题477Please respect copyright.PENANAXKz0HgsqrK
主角性别不是问题477Please respect copyright.PENANAsJsERSHve3
内心冲突不是问题477Please respect copyright.PENANAbYEgXb253r
主角被爱就迎刃而解477Please respect copyright.PENANASeuQhDdHR3
看不懂这点整部书就看不了477Please respect copyright.PENANApeDxrQHsmB
妳的书乏人问津是这道理477Please respect copyright.PENANAjcvUG59C1V
作者妳说主角口是心非477Please respect copyright.PENANATV10qvT9jr
欸我说这不对477Please respect copyright.PENANAyGHfXOgYC4
这明摆着口非心也非477Please respect copyright.PENANAViv4ZtmBXK
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰477Please respect copyright.PENANAiLM6eFiCiD
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵477Please respect copyright.PENANAga5NjHMNtc
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜477Please respect copyright.PENANASTYtpj0LSh
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的477Please respect copyright.PENANATVpmwQyxoT
为了被爱477Please respect copyright.PENANAIluyouiQbI
连原本的性别都不要了477Please respect copyright.PENANAwvAYIzh1ZQ
这主角疯的傻的477Please respect copyright.PENANAwHEgkfR50n
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色477Please respect copyright.PENANAFk47xm4RzO
女主伊莎477Please respect copyright.PENANAvJdHXKeSwb
单纯的色鬼477Please respect copyright.PENANAeDagbcjc6X
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性477Please respect copyright.PENANArNCNP5ZbQE
黑化可能
艾德兰477Please respect copyright.PENANA7aGKCTjPJf
可怜虫阿477Please respect copyright.PENANAK1ZsKo7Lt9
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了477Please respect copyright.PENANATn5nY8I6HO
妳说解释不够477Please respect copyright.PENANA2YKkGlc1ra
我到觉得清楚477Please respect copyright.PENANAOzrv2ArLAj
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够477Please respect copyright.PENANAm6wm8kyAoY
他为啥强477Please respect copyright.PENANAzFzVTvw28q
妳啥都没讲477Please respect copyright.PENANAcHDWJx3Ehh
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白477Please respect copyright.PENANARCpBUvqrW5
也是除主角外最明白的角色477Please respect copyright.PENANAdKTK6zMK1d
她就拿来爱主角的477Please respect copyright.PENANAVGIN1IMUkU
功能性角色
还有其他许多477Please respect copyright.PENANA9bz2yz2M2m
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多477Please respect copyright.PENANA9qBMZe1mps
可以瞧见妳的苦心477Please respect copyright.PENANAt6yB2lXy0U
我觉得这没必要477Please respect copyright.PENANAFZsWxZQpKZ
好的台词提一次够了477Please respect copyright.PENANAlFeoeMCg4o
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨477Please respect copyright.PENANA7vuQpT40qm
我倒嫌设定囉嗦477Please respect copyright.PENANAudFIEgEuF8
空白很重要477Please respect copyright.PENANAFEYKlU2oRv
没明白有没明白的好处477Please respect copyright.PENANAb5uxOCRGun
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说477Please respect copyright.PENANAdEvKq5M7yJ
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书477Please respect copyright.PENANAmSgUITyQ4R
我还会继续看的477Please respect copyright.PENANAirF8P2SXU7
确实好看477Please respect copyright.PENANAkCk4mqv2en
希望你这能写完477Please respect copyright.PENANAQRNpV0tQCY
能放上起点不477Please respect copyright.PENANAKlcWSIzsdJ
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
477Please respect copyright.PENANALh9x7K5Ru0
作者回應:477Please respect copyright.PENANAuvihB1MiLl
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,477Please respect copyright.PENANAiD98djnETs
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,477Please respect copyright.PENANADaxKDc5nJb
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞477Please respect copyright.PENANAdmCIqWE4Kn
感謝你的評文477Please respect copyright.PENANArrtAJxSMBH
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