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Widow of Highfire
Writer Frances
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  • G: General Audiences
  • PG: Parental Guidance Suggested
  • PG-13: Parents Strongly Cautioned
  • R: Restricted
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Widow of Highfire
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Widow of Highfire
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Thoughts of a Dying Husband
Frances
Comments ( 12 )
- this chapter really emphasized sidimund's fear of hania, for whatever reasons he had 'til he died :0
4 years agoreply
The Virtual Shadow - Short, but extremely effective and sets the mood pretty well.
4 years agoreply
Frances - Thank you!
4 years agoreply
Aretice N. Treader - This is a pretty haunting chapter. I feel like the characters in this story will be really complex and perhaps even self-contradictory? I don't really know, but that's pretty exciting. :)
4 years agoreply
Aretice N. Treader - I'm also excited to explore the effects of the plague as well as the characters' belief system more.
4 years agoreply
Frances - @Aretice N. Treader, thank you! You are so perceptive, it astounds me. And yes the belief system is very important to the main character of the book. And the consequences of the plague do eventually effect the rest of the book in a big way. I hope this first draft lives up to your expectations!
4 years agoreply
Aretice N. Treader - @Frances, I'm confident it will! 
4 years agoreply
Opal Anne Rochel - I love it. It's just enough to get me completely hooked on needing to read what comes next.
4 years agoreply
Frances - Thank you so much! I was hoping it wasn't distracting
4 years agoreply
Naerie - Hoo boy! That is one awesome start to a story!
What's the virus?
4 years agoreply
Frances - Thank you!! It's a plague, I go a little more into it in the next chapter
4 years agoreply
Naerie - @Frances, You're welcome.
Ha! I noticed that when I started reading, then cringed a little remembering that I'd already asked about it. XD
4 years agoreply
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