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Glory
Writer Alef Magnus
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  • G: General Audiences
  • PG: Parental Guidance Suggested
  • PG-13: Parents Strongly Cautioned
  • R: Restricted
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X. This Song's My Sorry
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Comments ( 6 )

Kathy - Talk about drama!
2 years agoreply

Alef Magnus - #Drama. Lucian what a guy.
2 years agoreply

Frances - What. A. Creep.

My only suggestion so far is maybe to play around with your spacing between dialogue lines and breaking a few of your paragraphs up a little. Other than that....crisp, clean, and clear writing. Fabulous.
3 years agoreply

Alef Magnus - I know! Ugh, Lucian.

I'll take a look into this suggestion. Some paragraphs can be really big blocks of text. I should fix that.
3 years agoreply

Frances - I'm a fairly good hand at paragraph breaks. If you ever need a second eye, just holler!
3 years agoreply

An Nghiem - LUCIAN DID NOT JUST USE THE "I LOVE YOU" CARD
3 years agoreply

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