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Writer Alef Magnus
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I. Three Years Later
Alef Magnus
Comments ( 9 )
J.M. Black - Again, your writing style (the sentence fragments) are very descriptive and demands the reader's attention. Be attentive of some tense confusion that happens throughout, but other than that, this is another great chapter that hooks the reader to the very next!

Keep writing!
4 years agoreply

RachaelMole - The flow of your writing is great, its so easy to read. The characters are developing at a great speed and the mystery is being set up well- who is Lucian and why isn't Glory allowed out!?
4 years agoreply

Alef Magnus - Guess you already found out after reading the next chapters! You people are fast readers haha :)
4 years agoreply

RachaelMole - @Alef Magnus, You set it up all so well, just the right amount of clues and information. Really well done.
4 years agoreply

jamber86 - Your ability to turn a phrase astounds me. The first two chapters are so good at creating that slightly oppressive atmosphere. The beautiful lie. It's almost like she's joined a cult, which probably isn't too far off the mark. I can't help but be reminded of Ke$ha. It's a really good set up.
4 years agoreply

Alef Magnus - Thank you for pointing it out! :) The story on its own has several modern pop culture references so you can expect to find more of those similarities in the next chapters.
4 years agoreply

Nicole Armas - Lucian seems pretty shady to me, like he is up to no good. Any person who is that controlling obviously has something sinister up their sleeves. This a great chapter and I love the inner conflict Glory has.
4 years agoreply

Frances - I love her inner conflict and Lucian is super creepy. I can't wait to see what happens when that porn star joins the party
4 years agoreply

Alef Magnus - I myself can't wait to get to that part but I'm afraid things would feel rushed. I mean nothing is final with NaNoWriMo but I'm just so eager to unravel the mystery like a Christmas present.
4 years agoreply