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覺得寫作最難的部份是什麼?
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Nobody
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6 years ago
我覺得是第一章,
能否吸引人繼續看下去就是全看於此.
要將最精彩的放在這章,但又不能破壞故事的發展,
真的很難,很痛苦.
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#12
夕惜
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6 years ago
劇情,一個不留神經常把劇情都輕描淡寫地完了。
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Nobody
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6 years ago
....沒試過這情況,
剛好相反,通常是越寫越多....
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#13
十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
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6 years ago
用字及節奏的配合很難掌握。
我很寫出一個認為很精彩很喜歡的人物事件,但用字要扼要到位,又不失太簡短,令人無法掌控內容。而且自問詞彙不足,一直在努力。
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Nobody
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6 years ago
不是嗎....你的作品已達專業級數也會出這些問題?
\@O@/
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
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6 years ago
@希陶,
首先感情你認為這是專業級。
但現在可能是脫離讀者群大遠,或是去不到更專業的水準,
開始停滯不前。這樣下去,早晚也會被遺忘。
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Nobody
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6 years ago
@多媒體廢作人,
好視乎你說的是那裡的讀者群,如果是說香港的話,
只可以說高登文化影響深遠,香港人喜歡看口語,
字要少,再抽水,最好是加甜.
只可以說時代變了.
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
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6 years ago
@希陶,
十分認同。老實講,我POST係高登無人睇。
如果只係為咗自High,係呢到都仲有讀者,大家都睇得開心。
但去到實際想做出版,無人理。
始終係賣人唔賣書。
一開始因為見你出問題想討論「寫作」,所以無特別就呢點去講。其實我自己覺得最大問題係面對出版市場。
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Nobody
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6 years ago
@多媒體廢作人,
我係寫呢方面都係唔得,所以先開呢個題.
至於讀者,我第一本寫既都係口語,所以係呢邊都係無咩人睇....
第二本係香討,紙言,你想,三個區出過,都唔係太多人睇,
但最可悲係,見到D是但寫幾百字都好高點擊率,
都唔知自己寫十幾萬字寫呢做咩....
我諗每個寫作既都希望有出書既一日,
但係....真係好高難度,一係自己比錢,
自問見到咁既點擊率仲邊有信心,而且都無咁多錢.......
現在只希望寫作團火唔好咁快熄.
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
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6 years ago
@希陶,
咁我建議你唔好放太重係讀者身上,
因為寫完無人睇已經係常態。
好似喬靖夫係分享都講,寫咗經唔多十年先有啲人睇。
宜家呢個時代好似好方便,但其實仲難過以前好多,
因為係人都可以寫故事,仲有面對台灣同大陸,
大家都係以免費中文小說,就算唔睇快餐文學,
都有勁多文筆好到爆、故事精彩絕輪嘅作者。
係地鐵見到如果有人睇故,十居其九都係簡體字,
你點會同佢地鬥?
而做粵文唯一嘅市場就係鍾意香港本土嘅網民,
你可以一邊係呢到寫,保持自己嘅作品更新,
另一方面找多啲香港嘅小說創作平台投稿。
如小心輕看、創造館,佢地都有心發展故事作品。
再唔係就勇啲去投稿比出版社,
天行者之前都有攪小說賞,佢地都係做流行小說。
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Nobody
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6 years ago
@多媒體廢作人,
多謝師兄指點迷津,
現在心態是先做好自己,寫好作品,其他野都唔夠膽諗
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#14
兀心
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6 years ago
要從默默無名寫出人氣作超難的,其他問題相形見絀(欸
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Nobody
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6 years ago
@兀心,
那是所有作家的終極願望.
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#15
M
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6 years ago
持續把故事寫完挺難的
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Nobody
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6 years ago
慢慢寫,終有一日會寫完的.
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#16
陳昱霖
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6 years ago
比較難的地方對我來說是故事架構還有要讓讀者知道自己想表達什麼
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Nobody
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6 years ago
如果是長篇小說,故事架構真的很要命.....
至於表達能力慢慢訓練自然手到拿來.
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#17
疾魂鷹
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6 years ago
本人有時會詞窮…╭(╯ε╰)╮
想不到合適的詞可以用,或是覺得沒辦法完整表達出那個意境、感覺
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Nobody
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6 years ago
有GOOGLE大神可以幫到妳.
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#18
小歐
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6 years ago
當然是結尾的時候呶——
小歐總是沒辦法讓故事結尾呶,因為「他們」不停在腦內嬉鬧著呶——
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Nobody
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6 years ago
@小歐。極度危險,
如果你喜歡自己所創作的故事角色,那一定會有動力完結它.
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小歐
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6 years ago
@希陶, 是呶~一定會結束的。
等到他們變成老婆婆老太太的時候呶~
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#19
莫妮
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6 years ago
總覺得人物描述有時寫不到很細緻~
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Nobody
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6 years ago
@莫妮,
我也有這問題,不會描述,不論人文還是場景.
有參考人家的作品,但自己怎樣也寫不出來.
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莫妮
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6 years ago
@希陶, 我跟你一樣有參考別人的作品,總覺得自己寫得不好,所以每次文章都要修很多次先會發佈。
發佈後又擔心讀者不明白 -_-
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#20
inkwrong
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5 years ago
個人是,持之以恆,還有描寫動作及心理的篇幅不對等
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#21
橋街過客
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5 years ago
覺得寫結局最頭痛,我總是無法搞懂怎樣的結尾才是恰當的。
但自己偏偏喜歡短篇,篇篇都要結尾。
不知道會不會有「我覺得應該完結,但讀者覺得『怎麼就這樣完了』」的情況。
另外就是心理方面,不時會質疑自己——
「反正寫得這麼辛苦都沒有變成大咖,為甚麼不放棄好過些輕鬆生活?還是你除了這個根本就沒其他方法打發日子,只好不得不寫下去?為何磨了這麼多年,還奢望從讀者那裡得到認同?你就不可以光靠自己活下去嗎?」
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始源
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5 years ago
我就是在想情節部分,總是想了又想,冊了又冊,和那些地方留白和伏筆的地方,會感到頭痛.但是想到了還是很開心的.
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能否吸引人繼續看下去就是全看於此.
要將最精彩的放在這章,但又不能破壞故事的發展,
真的很難,很痛苦.