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覺得寫作最難的部份是什麼?
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Nobody
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6 years ago
我覺得是第一章,
能否吸引人繼續看下去就是全看於此.
要將最精彩的放在這章,但又不能破壞故事的發展,
真的很難,很痛苦.
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EunDog
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6 years ago
@希陶, 我會覺得係寫完一條主線點將新既主線接落去
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Nobody
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6 years ago
@EunDog,
開寫前定好方向,有一個完整故事架構,
如果是中途加新主線難度真的很高.
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吳寒心
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5 years ago
@希陶, 計劃趕不上變化,靈感突然用光,或受到心情影響不小心寫錯
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#2
筆言
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6 years ago
完坑。
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Nobody
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6 years ago
這是另一個大問題,特別是寫了幾章,但沒人看,
連繼續寫下去的動力也失去.......
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筆言
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6 years ago
@希陶,
讓我有空來看看你的
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Nobody
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6 years ago
@筆言,
現在寫的是全廣東話,台灣的朋友未必看得懂....T.T
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筆言
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6 years ago
@希陶,
我有話過自己係台灣人咩
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Nobody
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6 years ago
@筆言,
哈哈,這邊多台灣人呀
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#4
面具
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6 years ago
感覺,角色內心之間的情感與角色的塑造。
面具不太會描述人物的穿著外型,所以會加強人物的性格描寫,也許有時會太偏激了,但現實生活中就是有這麼偏激的人。
面具一直想寫出一種角色,他即使不用說話,只是一個人站在那裡,看見他的人就會覺得他是一個很有故事的人。可惜這種角色太難寫,但我會努力。
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Nobody
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6 years ago
@面具,
感情我倒覺得還可以應付,
角色塑造當然是比較誇張一點比較好,
和現實太相似那不就是一個平均人.
要創造一個有深度的角色真的很難,
畢竟小說沒有畫面,只能靠第三身描述和內心對白.
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#5
黃大衛
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6 years ago
持續更文 @@
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Nobody
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6 years ago
@kokomila,
自己習慣是寫完小說才出文,
所以沒這問題.
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黃大衛
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6 years ago
@希陶, (*´∀`)
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#6
阿雀
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6 years ago
腦容量
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釉瑤
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6 years ago
@季候鳥, 我一臉問號(⊙x⊙;)
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阿雀
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6 years ago
@釉瑤, 就是容納大綱和角色的腦容量
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#7
滄藍
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6 years ago
最難→寫完跟修稿(
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Nobody
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6 years ago
寫完...不難.
修稿....痛苦.
每一次看回最初寫的東西都會有一種重寫的衝動 ToT
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滄藍
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6 years ago
@希陶, 對啊,所以修稿才是地獄(
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Nobody
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6 years ago
@滄藍,
還有最痛苦是要將寫好但覺得多餘的部份的刪除.
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滄藍
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6 years ago
@希陶, 沒錯!!!會超級捨不得的!花了時間寫整個刪不下手,可是不刪又很影響作品的整體性,好為難啊QQ
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Nobody
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6 years ago
@滄藍,
初寫小說時很在意字數,一心只想寫多一點字,
但後來覺得這想法是錯的,太多無意義對白,枝節只會影響故事流暢度.
所以只好狠狠地刪下去
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滄藍
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6 years ago
@希陶, 字數多寡倒是其次,內容若是太水的話就需要花點心思去做刪減。雖然字數多日更起來很容易,但其實劇情太水我自己是覺得不會被讀者記得,只能靠日更刷存在感,日更又只能繼續寫水,會惡性循環吶。
不如一次就先把稿都寫好、修好,再發布。
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#8
喪屍女王
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6 years ago
校對……
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Nobody
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6 years ago
@冰璃綺晶,
這事真的要找人幫忙,自己寫的東西怎看也看不出問題,但其他人看比較易
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喪屍女王
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6 years ago
@希陶, 而且找一個是不足夠,要找三、四個(
試過找了數個朋友一起校對最後還是找到錯處XD
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#9
煦焱
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6 years ago
架構和大綱
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#10
釉瑤
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6 years ago
恩…更文吧,因為我的外在誘惑有點多哈哈
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#11
釉瑤
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6 years ago
恩…更文吧,因為我的外在誘惑有點多哈哈
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Nobody
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6 years ago
@釉瑤,
近日自己也在玩MHW,少了時間寫東西.@@
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