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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8Rv6adv7sA
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnpwN04fU5G
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm63N2nMz4y
486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgfFuOVRp9J
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAbsS0ovkzT
486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkMatMmsqOM
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTTNqMzCyT9
486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlAp6x6kHHz
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ68DFx2iDYZ
486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3LO9VmYPCD
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdcKcInArJ7
486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKK7xrUomXT
And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡewvVIauvm4
486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzPuzeUlT5H
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN66VCOo12W
486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEviBgtf1Iq
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1azIwbYKOk
486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9D0Rib2KYT
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1OaxcGbX0W
486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsekrBdo4ty
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4TPZaHryue
486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVrlsJn96kG
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwElPx3vGk4
486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4LpiF14qlY
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHzHJBf10qO
486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsZsqOKQsoc
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaBeOA7XV4j
486Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5PBipKN5B5
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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