這次跟大家分享五月天《我不願讓你一個人》的歌詞翻譯練習。
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網上大多版本用的是I don't want to let you be alone,這裡我用了在英語世界裡更自然、而且語氣更難捨難離的I don't want to leave you alone。翻譯感情細膩的文字時,除了客觀技巧以外,更需要和原文以及原作者共情,才能譯出同樣感染人心的文字。
作詞:阿信245Please respect copyright.PENANAfgBbW6kRqZ
作曲:阿信 冠佑245Please respect copyright.PENANABiu1QExVaO
翻譯:弄墨
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你說呢,明知你不在還是會問
“What would you say?” I ask, even though you aren't there245Please respect copyright.PENANAlLoABHNAc2
空氣,卻不能代替你出聲
The air cannot speak on your behalf245Please respect copyright.PENANAS39H8iqzx8
習慣,像永不癒合的固執傷痕
Habits are stubborn wounds that never heal245Please respect copyright.PENANAUXTqJgyUMJ
一思念就撕裂靈魂
tearing my soul apart whenever I start missing you
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把相片讓你能保存多洗一本
I get an extra album for you to keep 245Please respect copyright.PENANAvd0pkX9gxX
毛衣,也為你準備多一層245Please respect copyright.PENANAUFHxGK2wVw
and an extra sweater for you to keep warm245Please respect copyright.PENANAd5GAueDtws
但是你孤單時刻安慰的體溫
Yet, when you’re lonely and need comforting warmth245Please respect copyright.PENANApZ3Q2g2Hke
怎麼為你多留一份
how do I reserve it for you?
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我不願讓你一個人,一個人在人海浮沉
I don’t want to leave you alone drifting in the sea of people245Please respect copyright.PENANAPkhvN7ZMUK
我不願你獨自走過風雨的時分
I don’t want to leave you alone walking through the storms245Please respect copyright.PENANAINrUTiFDTh
我不願讓你一個人,承受這世界的殘忍
I don’t want to leave you alone suffering in this cruel world245Please respect copyright.PENANA7ivoP9NfnD
我不願眼淚陪你到永恆
I don’t want tears going along with you till eternity
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你走後,愛情的遺跡像是空城
When you're gone, the remains of our love a forsaken town245Please respect copyright.PENANABPoYpYf0I4
遺落,你杯子手套和笑聲
where your cup, gloves and laughter reside245Please respect copyright.PENANAldcp2J8IGo
最後,你只帶走你脆弱和單純
In the end, you brought your delicacy and innocence with you245Please respect copyright.PENANAzWLkSPltHF
和我最放不下的人
together with the person I can't let go of
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也許未來,你會找到懂你疼你更好的人
Perhaps someday you’ll find a better one who knows you and loves you245Please respect copyright.PENANAHXLSKj9spS
下段旅程,你一定要更幸福豐盛
Your next journey must be richer and more blissful
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我不願讓你一個人,一個人在人海浮沉
I don’t want to leave you alone drifting in the sea of people
我不願你獨自走過風雨的時分
I don’t want to leave you alone walking through the storms
我不願讓你一個人,承受這世界的殘忍
I don’t want to leave you alone suffering in this cruel world
我不願眼淚陪你到永恆
I don’t want tears going along with you till eternity
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你說呢,明知你不在還是會問
“What would you say?” I ask, even though you aren't there
只因,習慣你滿足的眼神
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只是,我最後一個奢求的可能,只求你有快樂人生
My last, perhaps extravagant wish, is for you to live a happy life245Please respect copyright.PENANAGGhd0YLgoG
只求命運帶你去一段全新的旅程
All I wish is that you are taken on a whole new journey245Please respect copyright.PENANAodfcRuGCLr
往幸福的天涯飛奔
Speeding towards a world of happiness245Please respect copyright.PENANAB1vQHeN9oJ
別回頭就往前飛奔245Please respect copyright.PENANAb1ggre2Rti
Please don’t look back, just go forward245Please respect copyright.PENANAHOPpTQt2XF
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請忘了我還一個人
Please forget that I'm still alone