如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD2fDnQ95fB
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFNMB1vJCsH
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡawPTbkA36N
565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNMqwSNNxAh
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi0iApwwcKC
565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUaVYWOMGEy
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJF17dAsvnZ
565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhXHOpI9jor
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa27qxtSnY7
565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMyqApf0XKz
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR2RhQAJyjE
565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXb6ekHwVjj
And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWpgbqGSTOM
565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡg49yMCYJGe
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDn5JiEKhwU
565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡisc3sp8x5A
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFRo8j4qiH4
565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVKzSVMVAKG
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ760m4Enxp
565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEhJaRAfLS9
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8pXCrsMCK5
565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPl9N9O73I3
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJH7UjjkGsg
565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYtAXCG5gTB
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe2R1mgNCA0
565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcJkNPCv2j3
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyBw0qhPNTJ
565Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIUX9ualliW
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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