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Fractured
Co-Writer Jennie Camacho*
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Chapter 2: Rogues
Jennie Camacho
Nov 16, 2016
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- The story is picking up nicely, but I did notice you used a different set of quotes throughout the scene. Just thought I would leave some feedback =)
2 years agoreply

Jennie Camacho - Thanks. The different quotes were actually my way of trying to differentiate between words spoken out loud and those spoken through the pack mind link.  
1 year agoreply

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