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Hope’s Bright!
Co-Writer Cynderz*
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#23
Stellatrium
Cynderz
Jan 11, 2017
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Dlofc84 - Are you a fan of the greek philosopher Plato? “When modes of music
change, the fundamental laws of the State change with them.” With how you tie your book to music it has put me in mind of philosiphy class. I also like the application of karma you have in your work. Just a simple idea of sowing and reaping that is prevalent among so many cultures throughout the entire world (including science cause and effect) I really do love the overall message and the character development up to this point.
2 months agoreply

Cynderz - Karma plays an important roll in my book. There are many things that the characters do that come back to haunt them, even if they did the right thing at first. Stellatrium is the perfect example. It was created to stop War and end the Dark Oviri's reign but ended up being misused in modern times. There is one character in particular (I won't say who) does things that are quite awful all for the sake of keeping their love ones alive but ends up hurting them in the process. I'm glad that you can see the character development. It is something I've worked really hard on
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