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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡE7D28R8bFs
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpYNypyAFW1
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ41xb1aHsZ
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Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkcCEhR8ACV
472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡChhx3mxD0P
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡO3LELoTMsu
472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡS89e6gsA2a
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLPADvRFJPI
472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcFcDDpxmgk
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡln4yqWbQ8Y
472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjKH1w17bN5
And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHVpnZS7eRW
472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhLpUIiqRI7
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjYMuJV7DIu
472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK1s2zmeAK8
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtBYj8BDeRh
472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfXuKtBcDEI
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvJ85sG3YKt
472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3yMs8rkhBD
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8XPcG8GuB8
472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnEZbavehNW
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCTtjIlqTuo
472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCzivpExFwC
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAGuxBOoFCZ
472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNOEocAGmcn
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNkKtp2ihHS
472Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmCGinsYUvv
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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