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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFcsr5i5CDH
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH330EAaZah
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXnrtybvicL
512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRmkAjWohYY
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡA0yCpF2viX
512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiYksHB8ocC
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHWAJZM8AHk
512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeTT9nuKj2a
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNeW3StqKUF
512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmMTMKlz6hJ
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpxzWtas4Rj
512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡr2YfzZK7Ej
And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFraZHRqoOq
512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV4J9zf3Z2x
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSeE8LLgdht
512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpF3sx1aMMH
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAKe2XLz3kX
512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3thrEJqrK2
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡger3g1MYF3
512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtuAQmKXtdv
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsjvb8MFQS2
512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8zQv8dluTA
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7kOXQAM3Jr
512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa6HA5XV9XD
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu7o1ikTBBJ
512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvFd2sKSZWb
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuOqj9LPsTk
512Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuVx8imtQHl
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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