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Stories of Halloween
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#12
The Most Perfect Girl in the World: Watching
TylerDoak
Oct 7, 2017
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He watched her through her window as she looked in the mirror and brushed her hair, knowing that tonight would be the night he would sneak in through her backdoor and they would finally be together. Whether she wanted to or not. copyright protection6PENANAePBLtyGYYC10Please respect copyright.PENANAFrWeEAJ0B0

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Every now and then she would turn her eyes in his direction while he spied on her,  but she would quickly turn her eyes back to her own reflection. A smile spread across his face when her eyes would dart up towards his. On some level he believed that she knew he was out there and that was her way of giving him a green light for what he had planned later.copyright protection6PENANAR3XT7GjqCU10Please respect copyright.PENANAYPBU3fvNg6

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The past two months had been the best in his life. The past two months had been the most frustrating of his life. He found her while they were in line at Starbucks. She was standing in front of him and she ordered a large house coffee.copyright protection6PENANAV4H4AOoLyK10Please respect copyright.PENANAFvmhqqwVeM

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He liked that. Nothing fancy. Just the house coffee. Same as him. A girl who liked to get right to the point. Respectable. copyright protection6PENANAxBihtUvUeG10Please respect copyright.PENANAvEDSW3jsYy

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She had dark brown hair that smelled like flowers and coconuts. He had inconspicuously leaned in to smell it. It didn't disappoint. She wore a long, burnt orange sweater dress with black leggings and tall brown boots. She had a great sense of style. copyright protection6PENANAmiNar64fJp10Please respect copyright.PENANA6z8Js4NMxM

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When the barista handed her the large house coffee, she turned around and nearly bumped into him. An embarrassed smile crept across her face and their eyes met. She had enchanting brown eyes. She didn't wear her makeup too heavy. Again: very respectable. copyright protection6PENANALIhxJvTx7110Please respect copyright.PENANAdrklaMqXzX

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“Excuse me,” she said quietly as he smiled back at her. Her voice was sweet. Like the singing of angels in his ears.copyright protection6PENANA8HQaGpFzt510Please respect copyright.PENANAWGgh2r4spD

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He knew right then they belonged together. She needed to be his forever. She was a the most perfect girl in the world. copyright protection6PENANAGZ40IIMxrN10Please respect copyright.PENANAZ7igokHsN6

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The most perfect girl in the world walked over to the condiments station and put some cream and sugars into her coffee. All he could do was watch in awe. copyright protection6PENANAws3kqPQTuV10Please respect copyright.PENANAxNdQ3BbK4Y

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The barista asked him what he could like and he ordered a large house coffee as well. He paid for it, but he didn't have time to receive his order.copyright protection6PENANAMgkhd5sywd10Please respect copyright.PENANA6fqj5uVgf0

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She, the most perfect girl in the world, had finished fixing up her coffee and she was walking out the door. He had no choice but to follow her. copyright protection6PENANA9tV437Il6T10Please respect copyright.PENANAKXtbhzGcQV

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He walked far enough behind her that she wouldn't be able to realize that he was in pursuit of her. She and her coffee stepped into the Barnes & Noble. He crept in behind her. He walked up and down the rows of books to try and spot her. Finally he did. copyright protection6PENANAPj4uJrAZFA10Please respect copyright.PENANAJoAdARMg4D

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There she stood behind the counter, ringing up a customer. Of course she worked in a book store. What else would a high class woman like her do for a living? Of course she was highly literate. All girls as perfect as her were. copyright protection6PENANAwxLGWV4rw010Please respect copyright.PENANAon0YAAQnRU

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When he would spy on her at night he found that she was actually quite a writer. She would spend at least two hours an evening writing on her laptop and another hour reading. copyright protection6PENANA2Nt7soeg1H10Please respect copyright.PENANA22V21wDRTv

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She liked to read when she got out of the shower. With a towel wrapped around her. She drank tea while she did it. It was his favorite time of the night. A few times he had tried to see in her bathroom window while she was showering, but there was too much steam for him to see anything. So he settled for waiting until she was out to spy on her loveliness.copyright protection6PENANAi7JCEAFD3H10Please respect copyright.PENANAwz0rC1YgTR

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He had watched her thought the window and followed her every move for the last two months. He wanted so badly to go and speak with her,  but he could never work up the courage. It was the most frustrating thing he had ever experienced. But just being able to see her every night made it the best two months as well.copyright protection6PENANAanJpjYC9gg10Please respect copyright.PENANApENq5qr4Gl

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He had been waiting for this night. It was Halloween. He would use the holiday as an excuse to finally get to speak to her. He would dress up in a mask, knock on her door and say, “Trick or treat!”copyright protection6PENANAzX04Jd2TGg10Please respect copyright.PENANAmPVaf1AH5g

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It would be nice seeing her up close again. He had been able speak to her in person three times. All three times when he was paying for books at the bookstore while she was ringing up his books. copyright protection6PENANA8DDwTPyLGe10Please respect copyright.PENANAXqfTBvVbc1

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“How are you today?” she would ask.copyright protection6PENANACUrgJHdwzk10Please respect copyright.PENANA90jpUUUQ57

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“I'm fine,” he would reply with a smile. copyright protection6PENANA2jZeZi9UEZ10Please respect copyright.PENANADJ8W82R2SX

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“You want a bag for this?” she would ask.copyright protection6PENANA4IV2W9UYXy10Please respect copyright.PENANAs7UA42CW5v

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“No thanks,” he would reply with that same awkward smile. copyright protection6PENANAmgVgcsTPd210Please respect copyright.PENANAw1VrC0ufWA

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He considered the first time she had rung him up at the register their first date. The book and the receipt were on his mantle. Two vanilla scented candles burned on either side of the book that embodied their first date. Above the candles and book were dozens of pictures of her that he had taken in secret. It was his shrine in honor of her. copyright protection6PENANAOo4F5iw5Fh10Please respect copyright.PENANA7H438G3CWZ

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She finished brushing her hair and started to put on her Halloween costume. She dressed herself as a nurse. Not a slutty one, mind you, but a real one. A classy one. She was so perfect. copyright protection6PENANAdCEYAZGHfm10Please respect copyright.PENANAZey3hGKkjG

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She straightened her white skirt, grabbed her fake nurse’s bag  and pinned her nurse’s hat on her head then walked into her living room so that she could greet the trick or treaters who would start coming soon. copyright protection6PENANAxGR5maQvlq10Please respect copyright.PENANAJPzhSQYDbh

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With her out of the room, he slipped on his simple ghost costume. A sheet with holes for eyes. It didn't get any simpler than that. He thought that she respected simplicity. He wanted her respect. He needed her respect. He would get her respect no matter what the cost. copyright protection6PENANAA8OlZxb9M710Please respect copyright.PENANAnA3WRWMQAY

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Darkness had started to fall and he stepped out of his hiding place in the bushes and made his way around to the front of the house. A lone trick or treater was a few houses down. A girl in a cheerleader’s outfit was working the neighborhood for candy. copyright protection6PENANAHyVL4upzJL10Please respect copyright.PENANAfEWiAOfnEP

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It was the best opportunity for him. He would go up to the porch with the cheerleader. That way he wouldn't arouse suspicion by being much too old for gathering candy. He would look like her dad or older brother. It was perfect.  Just like her. copyright protection6PENANAY0MNRcYStE10Please respect copyright.PENANAOZHLhizwGe

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When the cheerleader made her way to the porch he fell in line behind her. The cheerleader rang the doorbell and the most perfect nurse in the world opened the door. copyright protection6PENANA7bI1knUZfW10Please respect copyright.PENANApNo7yGq8d6

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“Trick or treat!” they both said in unison. copyright protection6PENANADV7R548KqZ10Please respect copyright.PENANAEh63oFJPOX

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“What a wonderful cheerleader costume!” she said to the little girl as she held out a bucket of candy for her to choose from. The cheerleader took a piece of candy, stuffed it into her bag and headed to the next house. copyright protection6PENANAqXIocJdFIU10Please respect copyright.PENANATVf0ZEGItu

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Then her eyes turned to his. She giggled. “Oh my god!” she said. “That is the best ghost costume I have ever seen!”copyright protection6PENANAmOLxFk3UOz10Please respect copyright.PENANAgX3vX29DLC

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He laughed his nervous laugh along with her. “Thanks,” he said, “I worked really hard on it.”copyright protection6PENANAMZWCHaytwe10Please respect copyright.PENANA9gqdLngV11

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She laughed again and offered him a piece of candy from the bowl. He sheepishly took a purple lollipop. copyright protection6PENANA33RAavj1nI10Please respect copyright.PENANAPHrfVdDb9F

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“Hey,” she said, “You look like you probably have some muscles underneath that sheet. Do you think you could come in really quick and take a box of books down from the top of my closet?”copyright protection6PENANAAA7E2xoO2210Please respect copyright.PENANAC9x4osh1Dr

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“Ummmm…” he fumbled for words. This was going better than he had ever planned on it going. “Y..yuh… yes. I would be happy to,” he finally spat out.copyright protection6PENANAHTlqr8P9uJ10Please respect copyright.PENANAW9UudiWvkA

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“Great!” she said beaming. “It will only take a second!”copyright protection6PENANA9B9fTOwGOO10Please respect copyright.PENANArcAmGNEDjZ

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She moved to the side and cleared the way for him to enter. copyright protection6PENANAvFVPaEbcLm10Please respect copyright.PENANArbW1xDPch9

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He walked in. This was perfect. As perfect as she was. copyright protection6PENANAuqzcEvm0hF10Please respect copyright.PENANAaXD6ZaKOm1

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