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The Last Gods
Updated Dec 21, 2019
PG-13 Completed
4
6557
3
Mythology
Fantasy

In this world monsters and creatures of myth are real and when they were reveled to the world by a certain event, the world governments united to eliminate this threat and at the end of this brutal conflict most creatures were killed, the others were enslaved or studied. The enslaved had only one job and that is to kill the ones left in the world, the old gods.

At the current time the few gods left are on isolated islands. The world government sent ships to the locations and each of them has a team of 5 mythics to kill the gods on the islands. On one of those ships in addition to the mythics, there is a boy drafted into this military operation by his grandfather named Hashi.

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Mythology
Fantasy
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The Last Gods

In this world monsters and creatures of myth are real and when they were reveled to the world by a certain event, the world governments united to eliminate this threat and at the end of this brutal conflict most creatures were killed, the others were enslaved or studied. The enslaved had only one job and that is to kill the ones left in the world, the old gods.

At the current time the few gods left are on isolated islands. The world government sent ships to the locations and each of them has a team of 5 mythics to kill the gods on the islands. On one of those ships in addition to the mythics, there is a boy drafted into this military operation by his grandfather named Hashi.

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A Home For Me
Updated Nov 28, 2020
PG-13 Completed
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27
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Short Story
Tragedy

Okay, I think this story has been through enough rejections, time to put it on here.

This is a story about a man, a twin, that has decided to finally achieve his dream of being a writer and living a good life, regardless of how he gets it.

He does what he has to do, or, what he felt like he had to do.

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A Home For Me

Okay, I think this story has been through enough rejections, time to put it on here.

This is a story about a man, a twin, that has decided to finally achieve his dream of being a writer and living a good life, regardless of how he gets it.

He does what he has to do, or, what he felt like he had to do.

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A Traveler's Mind labyrinth-Poetry
Updated Nov 19, 2020
PG
5
504
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Just some poetry I've written in the past, present, and future. Sorry if it comes off as edgy or overly dramatic, I picked the better ones.

I would love some feedback on these, so I can improve this side of my writing so it doesn't come off as bad.

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A Traveler's Mind labyrinth-Poetry

Just some poetry I've written in the past, present, and future. Sorry if it comes off as edgy or overly dramatic, I picked the better ones.

I would love some feedback on these, so I can improve this side of my writing so it doesn't come off as bad.

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The Fly and the Spiderweb
Updated Sep 19, 2020
PG Completed
0
140
0
Short Story

I tried to write something a little bit more hopeful and in the style of a myth. Did it work out?

It's a story about a fly stuck in a spiderweb trying to find a reason for existing before he's eaten by the spider.

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The Fly and the Spiderweb

I tried to write something a little bit more hopeful and in the style of a myth. Did it work out?

It's a story about a fly stuck in a spiderweb trying to find a reason for existing before he's eaten by the spider.

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Undead Leafs
Updated Aug 28, 2020
PG Completed
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178
3
Short Story

A young man has died unexpectedly and has encountered death. They talk about his death and thoughts on life, but throughout their conversation, the man feels something beating in his supposedly dead heart.

What is life without a purpose unfulfilled.

So was this story too angsty and did it jump the shark at the end? I would love criticism, I would like for this to be good for the future and past works.

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Undead Leafs

A young man has died unexpectedly and has encountered death. They talk about his death and thoughts on life, but throughout their conversation, the man feels something beating in his supposedly dead heart.

What is life without a purpose unfulfilled.

So was this story too angsty and did it jump the shark at the end? I would love criticism, I would like for this to be good for the future and past works.

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Dance At The End of Our Time
Updated Aug 5, 2020
PG Completed
0
270
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Short Story
Family

This is a short story I made in the Tale Foundry group. They wanted the story to stay below 350 words and because of that, I had to cut a lot out. Here is that uncut version, our at least the parts I remembered to put back in.

After a father's 4th near-fatal heart attack, he once again meets with death. Now he must decide again whether to leave into a peaceful afterlife or struggle to live for his daughter's sake.

Drama
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Family
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Dance At The End of Our Time

This is a short story I made in the Tale Foundry group. They wanted the story to stay below 350 words and because of that, I had to cut a lot out. Here is that uncut version, our at least the parts I remembered to put back in.

After a father's 4th near-fatal heart attack, he once again meets with death. Now he must decide again whether to leave into a peaceful afterlife or struggle to live for his daughter's sake.

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Dancing under the Ashes
Updated May 24, 2020
G Completed
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336
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Romance
Short Story

Inspired by Hiroyuki Sawano – [Ashes] “Suite [Vocal: Gemie- Epic battle music video and formated for a magazine.

A girl sings for the fallen warriors of the army, they die for her and she cries for them. A caged bird who is forced to inspire soldiers to fight an endless battle is given a choice to be free.

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Romance
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Dancing under the Ashes

Inspired by Hiroyuki Sawano – [Ashes] “Suite [Vocal: Gemie- Epic battle music video and formated for a magazine.

A girl sings for the fallen warriors of the army, they die for her and she cries for them. A caged bird who is forced to inspire soldiers to fight an endless battle is given a choice to be free.

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The First Mage
Updated May 10, 2020
PG Completed
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416
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Tragedy
Short Story

I wrote this story for another publication and it didn't get accepted so here it is on here. What can I do to improve, is this really bad or just okay?

The story details the journey of boy who seeks to the power of magic, a skill lost to myth and forgotten by most. He's on an expedition to one of the last places of the old magical world, the Aion Temple.

Fantasy
Tragedy
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The First Mage

I wrote this story for another publication and it didn't get accepted so here it is on here. What can I do to improve, is this really bad or just okay?

The story details the journey of boy who seeks to the power of magic, a skill lost to myth and forgotten by most. He's on an expedition to one of the last places of the old magical world, the Aion Temple.

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Death's First Time
Updated Feb 22, 2020
PG-13 Completed
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563
3
Short Story
Tragedy

This is a short story I recently wrote for a magazine that got rejected so I'm going to put it on here and Writing.com. I would appreciate any criticism so I can approve.

The story is about the first time our current idea of death took a life.

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Death's First Time

This is a short story I recently wrote for a magazine that got rejected so I'm going to put it on here and Writing.com. I would appreciate any criticism so I can approve.

The story is about the first time our current idea of death took a life.

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The Brothers and The Crown
Updated Jan 25, 2020
PG Completed
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441
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Short Story
Tragedy

This is a short story I wrote for a school writing contest that I started in the past. It won thorough vote and a point system but because I was the one that started the writing contest it was disregarded. Tell me if this was story was any good in the first place.

The story is about what happens to a kingdom and their kings when a mysterious crown was gifted to them.

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The Brothers and The Crown

This is a short story I wrote for a school writing contest that I started in the past. It won thorough vote and a point system but because I was the one that started the writing contest it was disregarded. Tell me if this was story was any good in the first place.

The story is about what happens to a kingdom and their kings when a mysterious crown was gifted to them.

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D&D-LIKE: SURVIVAL MEETING IN THE AFTERLIFE RE-DO v3
Updated Nov 30, 2020
PG-13
149
6955
143
Action
Adventure

Choose a character that died in one of your stories or a character that you have not written of yet but want to test out.

Your character will wake up in an unknown dark warehouse with only the bare essentials. All of the contestant's characters will be separated into different warehouses in this old abandoned town. It's up to you to guide them into meeting up with the other contestants to figure out where they are and how to leave. If your character has powers then those powers have to be taken back throughout the story.

The direction of the story, twists, and turns, all depend on your creativity and teamwork with the other participating writers. I hope this will give birth to new friendships and renewed creativity.

The Cast of Characters:

Jayden "The Main Character" by Tenshi no Yami

Vandal "The Best Boy" by Ciro

Nu "The Best Girl" by Imascribble/Ciro

Senshi "The SpitFire" by HeartlessYT

Magpie "The Quickwitted" by FionaDaydreamer

??? "The Mystery" by Traveler

This is a continuation from the contest (Hosted by Traveler) of the same name

(Please check out the other participants for more great works!)

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Action
Adventure
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D&D-LIKE: SURVIVAL MEETING IN THE AFTERLIFE RE-DO v3

Choose a character that died in one of your stories or a character that you have not written of yet but want to test out.

Your character will wake up in an unknown dark warehouse with only the bare essentials. All of the contestant's characters will be separated into different warehouses in this old abandoned town. It's up to you to guide them into meeting up with the other contestants to figure out where they are and how to leave. If your character has powers then those powers have to be taken back throughout the story.

The direction of the story, twists, and turns, all depend on your creativity and teamwork with the other participating writers. I hope this will give birth to new friendships and renewed creativity.

The Cast of Characters:

Jayden "The Main Character" by Tenshi no Yami

Vandal "The Best Boy" by Ciro

Nu "The Best Girl" by Imascribble/Ciro

Senshi "The SpitFire" by HeartlessYT

Magpie "The Quickwitted" by FionaDaydreamer

??? "The Mystery" by Traveler

This is a continuation from the contest (Hosted by Traveler) of the same name

(Please check out the other participants for more great works!)

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